Description- Outline
I. Main idea
Who: Benny Wu-The vice-president of Goodwill Ambassador of Tamkang University Where: Interview by phone When: October 18th
II. Body
1.Basic background information
The third grade student in TKU
from Chung-Hua
six people in his family, including his parents, three younger sisters, and him
major in Mass Communication and minor in France
likes swimming and traveling
the motive of joining Goodwill Ambassador
interest in Journalism, markeing, and PR
hope can work on those relative field in the future
served as the manager of administration dept. and teaching dept. in goodwill ambassador and the manager of administration dept. in Mass Communication Student Organization
Writer's personal reactions
He is amiable and responsibility.
do right things in right time
Although he doesn't have much personal time, everything he copes with is also learning and discipline.
He can learn how to management his time well and expend expand his own life circle.
III. Conclusion
It is very glad that Benny can share about his abundant experiences with me. He encourages me that I need to figure out what I really want and achieve for.
Who: Benny Wu-The vice-president of Goodwill Ambassador of Tamkang University Where: Interview by phone When: October 18th
II. Body
1.Basic background information
The third grade student in TKU
from Chung-Hua
six people in his family, including his parents, three younger sisters, and him
major in Mass Communication and minor in France
likes swimming and traveling
the motive of joining Goodwill Ambassador
interest in Journalism, markeing, and PR
hope can work on those relative field in the future
served as the manager of administration dept. and teaching dept. in goodwill ambassador and the manager of administration dept. in Mass Communication Student Organization
Writer's personal reactions
He is amiable and responsibility.
do right things in right time
Although he doesn't have much personal time, everything he copes with is also learning and discipline.
He can learn how to management his time well and expend expand his own life circle.
III. Conclusion
It is very glad that Benny can share about his abundant experiences with me. He encourages me that I need to figure out what I really want and achieve for.
posted by Stacy Chiu at 1:04 AM
4 Comments:
Stacy, please rewrite the topic of your writing. This is an outline, not a draft.
Besides that, you should write more in the Body section such as Benny's hobbies, characteristics, opinions to his life, and so on. Please check some typos and grammatical mistakes with your partners or me.
Stacy, you got a really good job. wow~ I think your outline is ok, but how about to introduce a little a bit his family~
I think your body need to more details that can help reader to know more about the job you like.
I think that your body section should increase more imformation about her just like teacher's words. I think that will be more clear and plentiful!!
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